Date: 24 August 2011 20:22 (UTC)
askerian: Serious Karkat in a red long-sleeved shirt (FF7_Cloris_best kind of yuri)
From: [personal profile] askerian
Right, now he remembered. He didn't understand everything he remembered, but that was a separate problem
Pfff. ♥

She was asking him? Somehow that just seemed—wrong. Improper.
Okay yeah, she took a subby guy and made him ten times more subby. Ouchies. XD He likes it like that, too! I'm sure! >__>

"I don't want you to be afraid of me."
This is both adorable and really heartbreaking. Also it shows how far she's come, in trusting and loving him, that she can even want a relationship when she isn't in total control via terror, but because she trusts the guy to have her best interests at heart and that makes her feel safe enough not to *need* to be in control nonstop.

Since Xanxus was more of a tactician than she tended to let on, that was probably what she wanted.
X33333 smartness! manipulativeness! bwee.

If she didn't like getting off, why on earth would she spend so much time fucking him?
... ~__~ ouch. It's another sign of emotional maturity that she doesn't get pissed off about it but tries to explain! Go Xanxus. ;.;

he word hovered on his tongue and he wondered whether he dared use it.
!! ♥
Still not quiiite an "i love you" but close enough, considering how emotionally retarded they are. XD

!!!!!
Love you! Said her name! My man! My own! oh god the squees are killing me. I just heaved the loudest, longest, happiest sigh ever and it was all on automatic. XD

"My own. My Squalo."
ngh. NGH, I say.

OH GOD YES PLOT I CANNOT WAIT. But anyway... whee.

(And I love how her falling for him didn't imply him getting more dom-like or her being all 'okay from now on you can top me, i was only insisting on being in control because i was ~afraid ~of my natural place in the order of things~', but that's like loving a fic for not sucking and is not a great compliment, my apologies. Stupid cheap cliche-reinforcing cookie-cutter plots, they're friggin everywhere.)

You know, some days when I read this fic I forget entirely Xanxus was actually a guy in canon. She works so well as the woman you write her as. Badass and dominant and still very much a woman goddamnit.
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