Date: 29 May 2012 19:52 (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] askerian
It's really neat to see you write his POV; he's so quiet and matter of fact about what's going on inside, his emotions are all in the spaces between words, and yet there's so much of it.

this is such a *quiet*, *domestic* middle-age crisis. XD;;

"It's nice. It suits you." Takeshi has to raise his eyebrows; Hayato gazes back, all sincerity until he can't keep a straight face any longer and snickers. "It's very you. Especially the chintzy curtains."
XDDDD

When it dries, there won't be anything to show it was ever there.
I AM TOTES TALKING ABOUT THE WATER GAIZ, NO METAPHOR.

... uwah puppy therapyyyy~ UWAH KYOUYA.

I was starting to feel that there had been a specific event and not just the exhaustion of living this life for twenty years, but for a while I thought it was the Kyouya thing. Ouch, when he just allows things to go into sex as usual but it's not what he wants and it hurts underneath ;_; wauuugh. And I love how wordlessly they communicate, man no one on the outside would really get their relationship, but then again who cares if they don't :p The last wrap-up scene with Tsuna was v. sweet and I was glad to have some more background to light up a lot of the details in the fit, but at the same time the emotional journey was already complete, argh i'm sleepy can't explain well anyway it was well constructed i liked it and now i'm going thud. sorry to cut and run. XD thank you for writing this, it was so melancholy but at the end it's really... "hey dude it's spring, wake up and have some goddamn flowers already." ♥
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